I personally would have used a synth a little further from the original sound he used in his track. I also would have another more bass like synth underneath that supersaw to give it a little more depth and energy. The mix is good and their isn't really anything to complain about, other than a remix would entail using a modified melody instead of the original. Good work, I enjoyed this a lot.

Cut back on the first few milliseconds of that kick, that solid of a sound distracts from the rest of the instruments.